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PostSubject: Poetry - Another Poem I Wrote - The Colour of Love   Wed May 21, 2008 8:50 am

The Colour of Love

Love is strong but so concealing
hard to come across but easy to feel it
at least mistakenly
some feel they need it
others wish they'd never seen it
whether it's an action or a feeling
some will never know
cause you can feel it, & make it
this is how it goes
a lonesome young man & the girl of his dreams
so beautiful makes him want to scream
to the world his feelings for her
but he can't cause he doesn't realize what he feels
because the colour of love is unknown & unable to be seen
so instead he just screams & he screams & he screams
the confusion in his head the tickle in his abdomen
the picture he painted in his dreams
that girl in his mind that he thinks that he needs
but he can't even think or even truly see
the way love has blinded him
makes him want to fall to his knees
and cry tear after tear
the color of love is the colour of fear
cause when he felt it he was so scared
not knowing how badly it would hurt
the anger when he seen it's true colours
love is what one feels for
sisters & mothers fathers & brothers
that’s true love not that stranger
the one who makes you think
that you can't live without that one
you want to know the colour of love... it's danger
yeah it's strong...strong enough to strangle
stop & think when you feel you feel it
or it'll put you in a coma of nothingness
especially when you realize
that the one you really do love
you could never be with
cause she loves another
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