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PostSubject: My Hated Love - A Poem I Wrote   Sun Jul 20, 2008 3:15 am

My Hated Love

I love you, you hate me
Hate me with a passion
Nothing lasts forever
You say that this nothing,
Will be forever lasting
It's not nothing to me
You're my everything..
Why can't you see?
I just don't understand
What i did, or what I've done..
It seems that to you
I've done everything wrong
Nothing i do, could ever make you happy
I can't just give up,
You're my true love
The beat of my heart
The blood in my veins
The lyrics i write
To the songs that i sang
The tears on my face
Falling from my eyes
The silence at night
All i hear is your cries
The pain that I've caused
From the love that I've gave
The things I've tried to do
Then the price that I've paid
A lonely ol' heart
Younger than me
You hate that i love you
The truth now i can see
You've broken my heart
Straight from the start
I was just too blind
My love, that you hate...
Was always a lie
Your love that I've lost
I wish was still mine.
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